Pitch
Development Day: Idea Facts
Student Name: Danny Hewitt
Genre: (highlighted)
Comedy
Thriller
Drama
Location: House
Characters:
1. Knuckles – violent criminal
2. Mike – personal trainer who is very innocent
Goal: Knuckles wants to escape from the
crime scene
Problem: Jumps into Mikes house
via the window just as Mike comes through the door
Change: Roles reverse as Mike doesn’t save
Knuckles from the barbell falling onto him, which eventually kills him. Therefore
Knuckles is now a victim and Mike isn’t the nice guy everyone thought he was
The Idea: Knuckles commits a crime
and runs away, meanwhile Mike is on his daily jog around the estate, helping
old people across the road. Knuckles then notices an open window and decides to
jump in. This happens to be Mikes house and he’s just returned home. He has a
protein shake and looks at himself in the mirror. Mike then realises a movement
behind him and turns round. After a cautious look round the corner, knuckles
comes out of his hiding place and threatens Mike with the knife he committed
the crime with. There is then a confrontation as well as little dialogue. In
the end, Knuckles tries out the bench press (with a heavy barbell) and it falls
onto him, strangling him in the process. Mike, who spots people for a living,
decides not to save Knuckles and eventually he dies.
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